RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #64 Tide&Flesh
This week’s haiku challenge words are ‘tide’ and ‘flesh’. I’d prefer tide and fresh, but the challenge is to find a common ground to bridge the two words. 😉 So, this week’s haiku talks about the wavering human stand – imperfect and indecisive. It talks about sticking to one’s values.
Tide & Flesh
Like the endless tides
The weaknesses of the flesh
Always wavering
Khor Hui Min
29 September 2015
I like this one 🙂
Thanks 🙂
Nice haiku, it’s telling the truth!
🙂
Oh! Wow! I like this a lot. Wonderful imagery tying in the tides and the flesh with your choice of ‘wavering.’ Brilliant!
How right you are! Great Haiku 🙂
Thanks 🙂