Tide & Flesh

RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #64 Tide&Flesh

This week’s haiku challenge words are ‘tide’ and ‘flesh’. I’d prefer tide and fresh, but the challenge is to find a common ground to bridge the two words. 😉  So, this week’s haiku talks about the wavering human stand – imperfect and indecisive. It talks about sticking to one’s values.

Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge

Tide & Flesh

Like the endless tides
The weaknesses of the flesh
Always wavering

Khor Hui Min
29 September 2015


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8 Responses to Tide & Flesh

  1. Elizabeth says:

    Nice haiku, it’s telling the truth!

  2. Oh! Wow! I like this a lot. Wonderful imagery tying in the tides and the flesh with your choice of ‘wavering.’ Brilliant!

  3. Pingback: Ronovan Writes #Weekly #Haiku #Challenge #Review 64. 50 #Poets & over 70 #Poems | ronovanwrites

  4. How right you are! Great Haiku 🙂

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